Stick to 1 page. Paras would bring your core themes together; impropriety & illegality, PM’s position untenable, praise where praise is due. Good use of 2nd person singular but ‘You have achieved much’ is clumsy. Your last two lines are like an iron fist in a silk glove. 17/20
“I cannot continue to defend your actions”. Another damning letter, this time from Virginia Crosbie, MP for Ynys Mon and PPS to the Wales Office